Copywriting Tips for Fundraising Emails

MarketingSherpa has a great article up now (free access until October 29th, so hurry) featuring copywriting tips from fundraising email specialist Karen Gedney. Her advice contains a number of surprising twists, like “Write the subject line first.” (Gedney elaborates: “People spend all of their time getting their email right, which is a hard job because you are trying to compellingly piece together a lot of information into a small space. And then they slap the subject line on it at the last second. I actually start writing an email by going over a number of different subject lines. It’s all about distilling, distilling, distilling, until it is a finely polished gem.”)

Another suggestion I found intriguing was to watch YouTube videos on the topic you’re writing about, for inspiration — specifically, she looks for “real language” phrases and wording that create an emotional reaction in her, and pulls from those to write compelling copy.

Here’s a summary of the tips on their own, but you’ll have to click through to MarketingSherpa to read the whole article.

  1. Bring Copy to Life Via YouTube Videos
  2. Create a Word Picture
  3. Use a Provocative Campaign Name
  4. Optimize Copy and Images for Landing Pages – Now
  5. Short Subject Lines Bring In More Donations
  6. Dedicate Time to Subject Lines
  7. Write the Subject Line *First*
  8. Test Copy on Low-Risk Campaigns
  9. Don’t Expect Clickthroughs from Copy Links
  10. ‘P.S.’ Still Works
  11. Find the Right Copy Length: Think Short But Sweet
  12. Don’t Sleep on DM

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